Revision Intensive for Prose Writers (with Kate Senecal) - ONLINE
The revision process for writers is often billed as a way to "find mistakes and fix them," but in this 8 week course we'll reframe revising as a process of inquiry, a mechanism for prose writers to get at the heart of their creative intent, and a urge their work to grow into its best and truest self. During each meeting, writers will learn and practice targeted revision exercises that are geared toward seeing their work with new eyes and supporting them in addressing big picture issues such as structure, plot, characterization, and point of view choices along with sentence level and micro-organizational issues. Between class meetings, writers will receive supplemental craft readings and additional exercises and should plan on 2 -4 hours of work outside class time each week. While writers will be encouraged to brainstorm about their pieces and discuss their experiences working with the revision exercises, there will be no formal feedback offered during class time. However, each participant will receive a one-page professional feedback letter and customized revision plan from the instructor on a piece of writing up to 6,000 words in length by the end of the course. This course is useful for writers who are working in any prose-based discipline who have an early draft of a project and are looking to begin revising. For experienced writers (intermediate or advanced) engaged in revision work. Limited to 10 writers.
WHEN: 8 Weeks: Wednesdays, November 2 - December 14* (6 - 8pm EST)
WHERE: Online, via Zoom video conference
*No class on 11/23
ABOUT THE INSTRUCTOR
KATE SENECAL is the assistant director of Pioneer Valley Writers' Workshop, the former fiction editor of Storychord, a Grub Street writing instructor, and a professor at Umass Amherst. She has received an honorable mention in Glimmer Train’s 2019 Short Fiction Contest and was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2016. She holds an MFA from the Vermont College of Fine Arts. Kate’s fiction has been published in The Laurel Review, The Foundling Review, and in Storychord.com.
• Support writers in becoming their own best editors
• Reframe the revision process as inquiry based on/rooted in curiosity, not a hunt for mistakes
• Understand when to ask for feedback, how to use it and how to give it
• Understand the basic mechanics of craft in storytelling
• Build community
• Engage in fun prompts and exercises
WEEK ONE: MINDSET & USING FEEDBACK
What is revision? When do I ask for feedback and what do I do with it when I get it? Using thematic purpose as your revision north star. This week we'll discuss mindset, reading like a writer, and the ways in which to ask for and use feedback from peers. We'll also talk about the importance of getting clear on your thematic intentions for a piece.
WEEK TWO: PLOT
We'll review the basics of story arc, talk about generating tension to maintain the reader's interest.
WEEK THREE: POINT OF VIEW
This week we'll talk about the function of the narrator and discuss how to figure out whether the narrator you've chosen is the best storyteller for the job
WEEK FOUR: CHARACTERIZATION
We'll focus on how to portray characters or the real life people you're depicting in your stories in a way that makes them feel vivid and real.
WEEK FIVE: STRUCTURE / BEGINNINGS & ENDINGS
This week we'll think about how our stories navigate time, whether the events described are positioned in the right order, and also discuss things like epistolary devices, chapter/section length and other structural concerns. We'll unpack the best place to start and the best place to end.
WEEK SIX: SCENES & ACTIONS
What makes a scene? This week we'll figure that out and work through strategies to make the real-time "showing" parts of your story riveting and full of tension
WEEK SEVEN: TELLING, DETAILS, SUBTEXT, & SPECIFICITY
This week is all about the stuff in between the action, and the power of description. What do you say overtly and what do you leave out? How can you get the maximum power out of your detail choices?
WEEK EIGHT: SUPREME SENTENCES, VERBS, LINE EDITS, & KNOWING WHEN YOU'RE DONE
We'll talk about end stage revision work, and figuring out when it's finished.
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ONLINE SESSIONS happen remotely, via Zoom video conference. All you need is a laptop, computer, or phone with functioning audio and a webcam. Those who RSVP receive directions and a link to "join" the session via email (please see above note about receiving the Zoom link). All online instructors will log on to the video conference a few minutes before the start of the session, so please plan to log on early if you'd like assistance! We'll do everything in our power to help you get comfortable with the Zoom format, though we are not able to offer technical assistance beyond basic Zoom orientation.
REFUND & CREDIT POLICIES AT PVWW
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